Re: [lisp] WG Last Call on draft-lisp-introduction-07

Hi,

Well structured and written document, with the right balance between brevity and detail.

A few small nits, which can be fixed in a later update:
- The last paragraph of the introduction refers to the “LISP specifications” in plural and lists a single reference. I think it should read “LISP specification”.
- First paragraph of Section 3 s/inetrworking/interworking/ Same in Section 3.5
- I think someone already mentioned this in a previous review, I would replace dashes with parentheses when used like this: "typically -but not limited to- an IPv4 or IPv6 address”
- Right before Section 3.4.3.1 s/LISP-ALT and LISP+DDT/LISP+ALT and LISP-DDT/

-Lori

On Oct 25, 2014, at 3:03 PM, Luigi Iannone <ggx@gigix.net> wrote:

> All,
> 
> A lot of work has been done lately on draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-07 and the authors requested a work group last call.
> 
> This email starts a WG last call, to end November 14th, 2014.
> 
> You will find the document here:
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-07
> 
> Please review this WG document.  Let the working group know if you agree that it is ready for handing to the AD, or if you see issues with it. 
> If you see issues, please be as specific as possible about the problems, and if possible suggest text to resolve them.
> 
> Joel & Luigi
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