Re: [lisp] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lisp-gpe-12.txt

Luigi Iannone <ggx@gigix.net> Thu, 21 November 2019 02:17 UTC

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From: Luigi Iannone <ggx@gigix.net>
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Subject: Re: [lisp] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lisp-gpe-12.txt
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Hi Fabio,

I would suggest that you change the text in section 5.1 as follows:

OLD:

	The detection of ETR capabilities to support multiple data plane 
	encapsulations and shim headers is out of the scope of this document. 
	Given that the applicability domain of LISP-GPE is a traffic-managed
	controlled environment, ITR/ETR (xTR) configuration mechanisms 
	may be used for this purpose.

NEW:

	The discovery of xTR capabilities to support LISP-GPE and related features 
	is out of the scope of this document. 
	Given that the applicability domain of LISP-GPE is a traffic-managed
	controlled environment, ITR/ETR (xTR) configuration mechanisms 
	may be used for this purpose.


Other than that, the document looks good to me.

Ciao

L.



> On 19 Nov 2019, at 16:00, Fabio Maino (fmaino) <fmaino@cisco.com> wrote:
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