[lisp] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lisp-signal-free-multicast-07
Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Mon, 26 February 2018 13:27 UTC
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Subject: [lisp] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lisp-signal-free-multicast-07
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Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-lisp-signal-free-multicast-?? Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2018-02-26 IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-27 IESG Telechat date: 2018-03-08 Summary: The document is ready for publication as experimental RFC Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. in section 1 "The signal-free mechanism here proposed " should be "The signal-free mechanism proposed here " 2. in section 2 SSM is Source Specific Multicast not single source 3. in section 7 bullet 5 "When the the ITR..."
- [lisp] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lisp… Roni Even
- Re: [lisp] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Dino Farinacci
- Re: [lisp] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of d… Alissa Cooper