[lisp] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lisp-signal-free-multicast-07

Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Mon, 26 February 2018 13:27 UTC

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Date: Mon, 26 Feb 2018 05:27:13 -0800
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Subject: [lisp] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lisp-signal-free-multicast-07

Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-lisp-signal-free-multicast-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2018-02-26
IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-27
IESG Telechat date: 2018-03-08

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as experimental RFC

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

1. in section 1 "The signal-free mechanism here proposed " should be "The
signal-free mechanism proposed here " 2.  in section 2 SSM is Source Specific
Multicast not single source 3. in section 7 bullet 5 "When the the ITR..."

[lisp] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lisp… Roni Even
Re: [lisp] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Dino Farinacci
Re: [lisp] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of d… Alissa Cooper