Re: [lp-wan] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-02.txt

[Stephen Farrell <[e-mail]>]

On 24/05/17 09:14, Ana Minaburo wrote:
> Hello,
> 
> I’ve create a PR with the modifications, based on meeting consensus.

Thanks, I've merged that one and also PR#6 that expanded an
acronym.

The result is at [1], do yell if I got anything wrong.

Cheers,
S.

[1]
https://github.com/sftcd/lpwan-ov/blob/master/draft-ietf-lpwan-overview.txt

> 
> Ana
> 
>> On 19 May 2017, at 11:20, Stephen Farrell <[e-mail]> wrote:
>>
>>
>> Hiya,
>>
>> On 19/05/17 09:43, Ana Minaburo wrote:
>>> Hello,
>>>
>>> Do you think you can add the consensus we got in last meeting about for the section 3 terminology?
>>>
>>
>> Sure. What text would you like? (*)
>>
>> Cheers,
>> S.
>>
>> (*) Ideally, via a PR for [1] but however you prefer is fine.
>>
>> [1] https://github.com/sftcd/lpwan-ov <https://github.com/sftcd/lpwan-ov>
>>
>>> thanks
>>> Ana
>>>
>>>> On 14 May 2017, at 11:32, Stephen Farrell <[e-mail]> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Hi all,
>>>>
>>>> I've updated the overview document as planned (well, a week or
>>>> two later than planned:-). I still have two open issues that I'd
>>>> like to resolve before I'd claim that this is ready for WGLC so
>>>> I'll send separate mails on those.
>>>>
>>>> Other than that, it might be pretty close to ready, though your
>>>> comments are welcome of course. (Either on the list or as a PR
>>>> to the git repo.)
>>>>
>>>> Cheers,
>>>> S.
>>>>
>>>> On 14/05/17 10:30, [e-mail] wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>>>>> This draft is a work item of the IPv6 over Low Power Wide-Area Networks of the IETF.
>>>>>
>>>>>       Title           : LPWAN Overview
>>>>>       Author          : Stephen Farrell
>>>>> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-02.txt
>>>>> 	Pages           : 39
>>>>> 	Date            : 2017-05-14
>>>>>
>>>>> Abstract:
>>>>>  Low Power Wide Area Networks (LPWAN) are wireless technologies with
>>>>>  characteristics such as large coverage areas, low bandwidth, possibly
>>>>>  very small packet and application layer data sizes and long battery
>>>>>  life operation.  This memo is an informational overview of the set of
>>>>>  LPWAN technologies being considered in the IETF and of the gaps that
>>>>>  exist between the needs of those technologies and the goal of running
>>>>>  IP in LPWANs.
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>>>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lpwan-overview/
>>>>>
>>>>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
>>>>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-02
>>>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-02
>>>>>
>>>>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>>>>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-02
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
>>>>> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>>>>>
>>>>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>>>>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>>>>>
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