Re: [lp-wan] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-01.txt

Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie> Mon, 27 February 2017 17:25 UTC

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Subject: Re: [lp-wan] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-01.txt
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On 27/02/17 17:12, Behcet Sarikaya wrote:
> My technical comment is
> no bootstrapping overview has been included in the document. Why?

Nobody offered text. :-)

If you'd like to do so, please feel free to propose something
on the list.

Thanks,
S

> 
> Regards,
> 
> behcet
> 
> On Mon, Feb 27, 2017 at 11:11 AM, Behcet Sarikaya
> <sarikaya2012@gmail.com> wrote:
>>  Folks,
>>
>> This should be Revision 00 not 01.
>>
>> Regards,
>>
>> Behcet
>>
>> On Mon, Feb 27, 2017 at 11:08 AM,  <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:
>>>
>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>>> This draft is a work item of the IPv6 over Low Power Wide-Area Networks of the IETF.
>>>
>>>         Title           : LPWAN Overview
>>>         Author          : Stephen Farrell
>>>         Filename        : draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-01.txt
>>>         Pages           : 37
>>>         Date            : 2017-02-27
>>>
>>> Abstract:
>>>    Low Power Wide Area Networks (LPWAN) are wireless technologies with
>>>    characteristics such as large coverage areas, low bandwidth, possibly
>>>    very small packet and application layer data sizes and long battery
>>>    life operation.  This memo is an informational overview of the set of
>>>    LPWAN technologies being considered in the IETF and of the gaps that
>>>    exist between the needs of those technologies and the goal of running
>>>    IP in LPWANs.
>>>
>>>
>>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lpwan-overview/
>>>
>>> There's also a htmlized version available at:
>>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-01
>>>
>>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-01
>>>
>>>
>>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
>>> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>>>
>>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>>>
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