Re: [Lsr] Shepherd review comments on draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-29
"Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com> Wed, 23 January 2019 16:19 UTC
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To: Ladislav Lhotka <lhotka@nic.cz>, "stephane.litkowski@orange.com" <stephane.litkowski@orange.com>, tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>, Yingzhen Qu <yingzhen.qu@huawei.com>, "lsr@ietf.org" <lsr@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: [Lsr] Shepherd review comments on draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-29
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Subject: Re: [Lsr] Shepherd review comments on draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-29
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Tom, Lada, Stephane, I've changed the XML formatting so that the actual ietf-isis.yang model can be embedded as is without any substitution characters. This is in the -33 version. There are no other changes in this version (other than removing some trailing white spaces and expanding tabs). Thanks, Acee On 1/23/19, 4:09 AM, "Ladislav Lhotka" <lhotka@nic.cz> wrote: Hi Stéphane, the problem is in the source of the "ietf-isis" module inside <artwork>: the chevrons enclosing email addresses should be encoded as XML entities < and > but what I see there is &lt; and &gt; Lada On Tue, 2019-01-22 at 16:18 +0000, stephane.litkowski@orange.com wrote: > Hi Tom, > > This is plaintext. You can see it in the XML source of the draft, there is no > link in the YANG module. > Is your concern coming from the "[" "]" characters ? Just a copy/paste from > the text version of the boilerplate, but there is no link behind. > > > -----Original Message----- > From: Lsr [mailto:lsr-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of tom petch > Sent: Tuesday, January 22, 2019 13:48 > To: Acee Lindem (acee); Yingzhen Qu; lsr@ietf.org; > draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg@ietf.org > Subject: Re: [Lsr] Shepherd review comments on draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg- > 29 > > -32 has the RFC2119 boilerplate in the YANG module - thank you - but... > YANG modules must be plain text and > > "are to be interpreted as described in BCP 14 [RFC2119] > [RFC8174] when, and only when, they appear in all capitals, as > shown here." > > looks rather like XML/HTML anchors and not plain text. > > Time idnits learnt what a YANG module looks like! > > Tom Petch > > ----- Original Message ----- > From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com> > To: "Yingzhen Qu" <yingzhen.qu@huawei.com>; <lsr@ietf.org>; > <draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg@ietf.org> > Sent: Monday, January 21, 2019 9:07 PM > Subject: Re: [Lsr] Shepherd review comments on > draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-29 > > > > Hi Yingzhen, > > All the idnits warnings are fixed in the -32 version of the drafts. > > Thanks, > > Acee > > > > From: Yingzhen Qu <yingzhen.qu@huawei.com> > > Date: Friday, January 18, 2019 at 5:35 PM > > To: "lsr@ietf.org" <lsr@ietf.org>, > "draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg@ietf.org" > <draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg@ietf.org> > > Subject: Shepherd review comments on draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-29 > > Resent-From: <alias-bounces@ietf.org> > > Resent-To: Stephane Litkowski <stephane.litkowski@orange.com>, Derek > Yeung <derek@arrcus.com>, Acee Lindem <acee@cisco.com>, Jeffrey Zhang > <zzhang@juniper. > > _______________________________________________ > Lsr mailing list > Lsr@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/lsr > > ______________________________________________________________________________ > ___________________________________________ > > Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations > confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc > pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce > message par erreur, veuillez le signaler > a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages > electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, > Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou > falsifie. Merci. > > This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged > information that may be protected by law; > they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. > If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete > this message and its attachments. > As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been > modified, changed or falsified. > Thank you. > -- Ladislav Lhotka Head, CZ.NIC Labs PGP Key ID: 0xB8F92B08A9F76C67
- [Lsr] Shepherd review comments on draft-ietf-isis… Yingzhen Qu
- Re: [Lsr] Shepherd review comments on draft-ietf-… stephane.litkowski
- Re: [Lsr] Shepherd review comments on draft-ietf-… Acee Lindem (acee)
- Re: [Lsr] Shepherd review comments on draft-ietf-… Acee Lindem (acee)
- Re: [Lsr] Shepherd review comments on draft-ietf-… Yingzhen Qu
- Re: [Lsr] Shepherd review comments on draft-ietf-… tom petch
- Re: [Lsr] Shepherd review comments on draft-ietf-… stephane.litkowski
- Re: [Lsr] Shepherd review comments on draft-ietf-… tom petch
- Re: [Lsr] Shepherd review comments on draft-ietf-… Ladislav Lhotka
- Re: [Lsr] Shepherd review comments on draft-ietf-… Acee Lindem (acee)