[Lsr] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-isis-te-app-13
Jouni Korhonen via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 29 May 2020 13:10 UTC
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Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-isis-te-app-?? Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen Review Date: 2020-05-29 IETF LC End Date: 2020-05-29 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Not really my area of expertise, however, I did not spot any issues during the review. The document is ready for publication. Major issues: None. Minor issues: None. Nits/editorial comments: * There are spacing issues mostly with parenthesis in the text that the RFC editor likely takes care of. * On line 165 SR is used without expanding it. The expansion is obvious but the RFC has both "Segment Routing" and "Shared Risk" used with SRxx.. * At least Section 5 has "is NOT" and "does NOT" emphasis used. I would use just "is not" and "does not", since those with "NOT" are not in listed in normal "Requirements Language".
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