[Lsr] draft-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id-04 Shepherd review

Yingzhen Qu <yingzhen.qu@huawei.com> Sun, 08 July 2018 22:41 UTC

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Dear authors,

I have done shepherd review of draft-ietf-ospf-lls-id-04 as requested by LSR chairs. I’d like to thank all authors for their contributions on this document, also people who have reviewed this document and provided valuable comments and discussions.

The document is well written and ready for publication.

IDNITS check found a couple of nits:

  Miscellaneous warnings:
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  ** The document contains RFC2119-like boilerplate, but doesn't seem to
     mention RFC 2119.  The boilerplate contains a reference [BCP14], but that
     reference does not seem to mention RFC 2119 either.

  -- The document date (July 1, 2018) is 7 days in the past.  Is this
     intentional?


  Checking references for intended status: Proposed Standard
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     (See RFCs 3967 and 4897 for information about using normative references
     to lower-maturity documents in RFCs)

  == Unused Reference: 'ISO10589' is defined on line 200, but no explicit
     reference was found in the text
     '[ISO10589] International Organization for Standardization, "Intermed...'

  -- Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref. 'BCP14'

  -- Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref. 'ISO10589'


     Summary: 1 error (**), 0 flaws (~~), 1 warning (==), 3 comments (--).

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Thanks,
Yingzhen