Re: [Lsr] New Version Notification for draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-flooding-00.txt

Hi Tom,

Thank you very much for your comments.  We will address them in the -02 version
of the draft.

Tony

> On Sep 6, 2019, at 1:40 PM, tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> wrote:
> 
> I am confused
> 
> You have
> 
> reference "RFC XXXX - YANG model for Open Shortest Path First (OSPF).
> "RFC XXXX: A YANG data model for OSPF Dense topology";
> reference " RFC XXXX - Dynamic Flooding on Dense Graphs";
> 
> whereas XXXX is customarily used as a placeholder for the RFC which the
> I-D becomes; I see no reference to the name at the start of the I-D,
> namely
> YANG Data Model for Dynamic Flooding
> which must appear in the IANA Considerations, which it does not as they
> are absent.
> 
> Also, many lines are too long for an RFC which makes the I-D (too)
> difficult to read on a screen.
> 
> Tom Petch
> 
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: <tony.li@tony.li>
> To: <lsr@ietf.org>
> Sent: Thursday, September 05, 2019 1:49 AM
> Subject: [Lsr] Fwd: New Version Notification for
> draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-flooding-00.txt
> 
> 
> 
> Hi all,
> 
> This is the first draft of a YANG model for Dynamic Flooding.
> 
> We welcome your comments.  Please be gentle as we are YANG n00bs.
> 
> Regards,
> Srinath & Tony
> 
> 
>> Begin forwarded message:
>> 
>> From: internet-drafts@ietf.org
>> Subject: New Version Notification for
> draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-flooding-00.txt
>> Date: September 4, 2019 at 5:47:26 PM PDT
>> To: "Srinath Dontula" <sd947e@att.com>, "Tony Li" <tony.li@tony.li>
>> 
>> 
>> A new version of I-D, draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-flooding-00.txt
>> has been successfully submitted by Tony Li and posted to the
>> IETF repository.
>> 
>> Name: draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-flooding
>> Revision: 00
>> Title: YANG Data Model for Dynamic Flooding
>> Document date: 2019-09-03
>> Group: Individual Submission
>> Pages: 16
>> URL:
> https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-floo
> ding-00.txt
>> Status:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-flooding
> /
>> Htmlized:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-flooding-00
>> Htmlized:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-flo
> oding
>> 
>> 
>> Abstract:
>>  This document defins YANG data models that can be used to configure
>>  and manage Dynamic Flooding for IS-IS and OSPF.
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> 
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