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Re: [Lsr] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7810 (5486)

stefano previdi <stefano@previdi.net> Mon, 03 September 2018 07:55 UTC

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From: stefano previdi <stefano@previdi.net>
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Date: Mon, 03 Sep 2018 09:54:02 +0200
Cc: spencer.giacalone@gmail.com, Dave Ward <wardd@cisco.com>, John E Drake <jdrake@juniper.net>, sunseawq@huawei.com, "BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A (ATTSI)" <db3546@att.com>, Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>, Martin Vigoureux <martin.vigoureux@nokia.com>, Christian Hopps <chopps@chopps.org>, Hannes Gredler <hannes@gredler.at>, buptly@gmail.com
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Subject: Re: [Lsr] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7810 (5486)
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Les, Acee, Alvaro,

diffs looks ok to me.


s.


> On Aug 31, 2018, at 7:56 AM, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> 
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7810,
> "IS-IS Traffic Engineering (TE) Metric Extensions".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5486
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Teresa <buptly@gmail.com>
> 
> Section: 4.6
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
> Available Bandwidth: This field carries the available bandwidth on a
>   link, forwarding adjacency, or bundled link in IEEE floating-point
>   format with units of bytes per second.  For a link or forwarding
>   adjacency, available bandwidth is defined to be residual bandwidth
>   (see Section 4.5) minus the measured bandwidth used for the actual
>   forwarding of non-RSVP-TE label switched path packets.  For a bundled
>   link, available bandwidth is defined to be the sum of the component
>   link available bandwidths minus the measured bandwidth used for the
>   actual forwarding of non-RSVP-TE label switched path packets.  For a
>   bundled link, available bandwidth is defined to be the sum of the
>   component link available bandwidths.
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
> Available Bandwidth: This field carries the available bandwidth on a
>   link, forwarding adjacency, or bundled link in IEEE floating-point
>   format with units of bytes per second.  For a link or forwarding
>   adjacency, available bandwidth is defined to be residual bandwidth
>   (see Section 4.5) minus the measured bandwidth used for the actual
>   forwarding of non-RSVP-TE label switched path packets.  For a bundled
>   link, available bandwidth is defined to be the sum of the component
>   link (residual) bandwidths minus the measured bandwidth used for the
>   actual forwarding of non-RSVP-TE label switched path packets.For a
>   bundled link, available bandwidth is defined to be the sum of the
>   component link available bandwidths.
> 
> Notes
> -----
> Two sentences to explain 'available bandwidth' on a bundled link, but one says "sum of component available bandwidth minus xxx", the other says "sum of component available bandwidth", is conflicting. need to change the first sentence to 'sum of component residual bandwidth minus xxx'
> 
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> 
> --------------------------------------
> RFC7810 (draft-ietf-isis-te-metric-extensions-11)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : IS-IS Traffic Engineering (TE) Metric Extensions
> Publication Date    : May 2016
> Author(s)           : S. Previdi, Ed., S. Giacalone, D. Ward, J. Drake, Q. Wu
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : IS-IS for IP Internets
> Area                : Routing
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
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