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[Lsr] Comments on draft-li-ospf-ospfv3-srv6-extensions-07.txt

"Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com> Thu, 12 December 2019 21:44 UTC

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From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>
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Subject: [Lsr] Comments on draft-li-ospf-ospfv3-srv6-extensions-07.txt
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Hi Robin, et al,
One thing I’d like to see is incorporation of the text for the MSD types in the draft. It is less than one and a half pages and it doesn’t make sense to reference the IS-IS draft. I’ve also attached my editorial comments.

Thanks,
Acee

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