[Lsr] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-37

Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 18 September 2019 16:14 UTC

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Subject: [Lsr] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-37

Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-??
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2019-09-18
IETF LC End Date: 2019-09-23
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: A true magnum opus. Well written and from a GENART point of view ready
to be published. I have not checked the YANG syntax, and have only checked that
the configuration symantics look plausible. I assume that specalist YANG and
Routing reviewers will look at that detail.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
   This document defines a YANG data model that can be used to configure
   and manage IS-IS protocol on network elements.

SB> s/manage/manage the/

[Lsr] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-isis-… Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
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