Re: [Lsr] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-ospf-yang-26: (with COMMENT)

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From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>
To: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-ospf-yang-26: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [Lsr] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-ospf-yang-26: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Alissa,

On 8/21/19, 9:29 AM, "Alissa Cooper via Datatracker" <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

    Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
    draft-ietf-ospf-yang-26: No Objection
    
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    Per the Gen-ART review, I think 2.3 may be a little clearer if it were to say
    "The field 'version' is used to indicate the OSPF LSA version and is mandatory."

This change has already been made in response to the Gen-ART review.

2.3.  OSPFv2 and OSPFv3

   The data model defined herein supports both OSPFv2 and OSPFv3.

   The field 'version' is used to indicate the OSPF version and is
   mandatory.  Based on the configured version, the data model varies to
   accommodate the differences between OSPFv2 and OSPFv3.

Thanks,
Acee
    
    I did not review this entire document but I'm balloting based on the Gen-ART
    review.