Re: [Lsr] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-mpls-elc-12: (with COMMENT)

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From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>
To: "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com>, "Peter Psenak (ppsenak)" <ppsenak@cisco.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Hi Eric,


On 5/11/20, 3:50 PM, "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com> wrote:

    Peter,

    I will have a look for Alvaro's reply to Barry's comment then :)

https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/lsr/EcufJn28CFrGkfQ2k6LUOYBcZXc/

Thanks,
Acee

    The suggested text below will fix the nit indeed.

    Thank you

    -éric

    -----Original Message-----
    From: Peter Psenak <ppsenak@cisco.com>
    Date: Monday, 11 May 2020 at 19:14
    To: Eric Vyncke <evyncke@cisco.com>om>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
    Cc: "draft-ietf-isis-mpls-elc@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-isis-mpls-elc@ietf.org>rg>, "lsr-chairs@ietf.org" <lsr-chairs@ietf.org>rg>, "lsr@ietf.org" <lsr@ietf.org>rg>, "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>om>, "aretana.ietf@gmail.com" <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>
    Subject: Re: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-mpls-elc-12: (with COMMENT)

        Hi Eric,

        please see inline:

        On 11/05/2020 18:02, Éric Vyncke via Datatracker wrote:
        > Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
        > draft-ietf-isis-mpls-elc-12: No Objection
        > 
        > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all
        > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this
        > introductory paragraph, however.)
        > 
        > 
        > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html
        > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.
        > 
        > 
        > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
        > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-isis-mpls-elc/
        > 
        > 
        > 
        > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
        > COMMENT:
        > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
        > 
        > Thank you for the work put into this document. The document is easy to read.
        > 
        > Like other ADs, I wonder why the IS-IS and OSPF are separate documents.

        Alvaro has responded to similar query from Barry Leiba.

        > 
        > Please find below one NIT.
        > 
        > I hope that this helps to improve the document,
        > 
        > Regards,
        > 
        > -éric
        > 
        > == NIT ==
        > 
        > -- section 4 --
        > The "one" is ambiguous in "the router MUST advertise the smallest one." even if
        > we can guess that it is not "interface" ;-)

        ok, what would you like to say instead "one"?

        Would this be better:

        If a router has multiple interfaces with different capabilities of 
        reading the maximum label stack depth, the router MUST advertise the 
        smallest value found across all of its interfaces.

        thanks,
        Peter


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