Re: [Lsr] New Version Notification for draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-flooding-00.txt

tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> Wed, 11 September 2019 10:39 UTC

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From: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>
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Subject: Re: [Lsr] New Version Notification for draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-flooding-00.txt
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Tony

I suggest you have a read of  RFC8407, not so much s.4, which is rather
detailed, but the other sections.

Tom Petch


----- Original Message -----
From: <tony.li@tony.li>;
To: "tom petch" <ietfc@btconnect.com>;
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Sent: Saturday, September 07, 2019 3:51 AM

Hi Tom,

Thank you very much for your comments.  We will address them in the -02
version
of the draft.

Tony


> On Sep 6, 2019, at 1:40 PM, tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>; wrote:
>
> I am confused
>
> You have
>
> reference "RFC XXXX - YANG model for Open Shortest Path First (OSPF).
> "RFC XXXX: A YANG data model for OSPF Dense topology";
> reference " RFC XXXX - Dynamic Flooding on Dense Graphs";
>
> whereas XXXX is customarily used as a placeholder for the RFC which
the
> I-D becomes; I see no reference to the name at the start of the I-D,
> namely
> YANG Data Model for Dynamic Flooding
> which must appear in the IANA Considerations, which it does not as
they
> are absent.
>
> Also, many lines are too long for an RFC which makes the I-D (too)
> difficult to read on a screen.
>
> Tom Petch
>
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: <tony.li@tony.li>;
> To: <lsr@ietf.org>;
> Sent: Thursday, September 05, 2019 1:49 AM
> Subject: [Lsr] Fwd: New Version Notification for
> draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-flooding-00.txt
>
>
>
> Hi all,
>
> This is the first draft of a YANG model for Dynamic Flooding.
>
> We welcome your comments.  Please be gentle as we are YANG n00bs.
>
> Regards,
> Srinath & Tony
>
>
>> Begin forwarded message:
>>
>> From: internet-drafts@ietf.org
>> Subject: New Version Notification for
> draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-flooding-00.txt
>> Date: September 4, 2019 at 5:47:26 PM PDT
>> To: "Srinath Dontula" <sd947e@att.com>;, "Tony Li" <tony.li@tony.li>;
>>
>>
>> A new version of I-D, draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-flooding-00.txt
>> has been successfully submitted by Tony Li and posted to the
>> IETF repository.
>>
>> Name: draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-flooding
>> Revision: 00
>> Title: YANG Data Model for Dynamic Flooding
>> Document date: 2019-09-03
>> Group: Individual Submission
>> Pages: 16
>> URL:
>
https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-floo
> ding-00.txt
>> Status:
>
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-flooding
> /
>> Htmlized:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-flooding-00
>> Htmlized:
>
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-flo
> oding
>>
>>
>> Abstract:
>>  This document defins YANG data models that can be used to configure
>>  and manage Dynamic Flooding for IS-IS and OSPF.
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
> submission
>> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>>
>> The IETF Secretariat
>>
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