[Lsr] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-yang-isis-reverse-metric-01

Michael Richardson via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 07 December 2020 02:49 UTC

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Reviewer: Michael Richardson
Review result: Ready

This document is a short YANG module relating to RFC8500, and expertise in that
RFC are required to be sure if all the right control bits are required. It has
reasonable security consideration, although the words, "The lowest NETCONF
layer is the secure transport layer" seems a bit awkward. I would instead
write, "All [NETCONF] transactions run over a secure transport layer, which is