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From: "Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" <ginsberg@cisco.com>
To: Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.ietf@gmail.com>, Christian Hopps <chopps@chopps.org>
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Subject: Re: [Lsr] [Teas] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5316bis
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Dhruv -



Thanx for reviewing/supporting the draft.

Please see inline.



> -----Original Message-----

> From: Lsr <lsr-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Dhruv Dhody

> Sent: Wednesday, March 03, 2021 2:09 AM

> To: Christian Hopps <chopps@chopps.org>

> Cc: TEAS WG Chairs <teas-chairs@ietf.org>; teas-ads@ietf.org; TEAS WG

> (teas@ietf.org) <teas@ietf.org>; lsr-chairs@ietf.org; lsr@ietf.org; lsr-

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> Subject: Re: [Lsr] [Teas] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5316bis

>

> Hi,

>

> I went through the diff with RFC5316. The changes look good. Some

> minor comments -

>

> (1) Is it wise to use normative keywords MUST and SHOULD in the

> appendix? The text is from section 3.1 but can it be reworded in the

> appendix? Also wondering if other changes (IANA, nits) could be listed

> or we could call it "major change" :)



[Les:] I personally do not have an issue using the normative keywords in the Appendix. Not doing so I think might trigger someone to ask if there is some inconsistency between the Appendix text and the text in the body of the draft. 😊

If you know of some prohibition against using such keywords in an Appendix please provide the reference.



The IANA change is a consequence of the introduction pf new  IPv6 Local ASBR identifier sub-TLV. I do not see the need to mention it in the Appendix.



I do not understand your comment about "major change". Could you explain?



>

> (2) IPv6 Local ASBR ID and IPv6 Router ID is used interchangeably i.e.

> table in IANA section 6.2 does not use the same name as the table in

> section 3.1

>



[Les:] The use of " IPv6 Router ID" in Section 3.1 is inconsistent. I will fix that.

Thanx for pointing that out.



   Les



> Hope this helps!

>

> Thanks!

>

> Dhruv

>

>

>

> On Wed, Feb 17, 2021 at 9:00 PM Christian Hopps <chopps@chopps.org<mailto:chopps@chopps.org>>

> wrote:

> >

> > Hi LSR and TEAS,

> >

> > This begins a joint WG last call for:

> >

> >   https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5316bis/

> >

> > Please discuss any issues on the LSR mailing list. The WGLC will end March

> 3, 2021.

> >

> > Authors, please indicate wether you are aware of any IPR related to this

> document to the list.

> >

> > Thanks,

> > Chris, Acee, (Lou and Pavan).

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