Re: [Lsr] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-flooding-00.txt

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From: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>
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Subject: Re: [Lsr] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-flooding-00.txt
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I am confused

You have

 reference "RFC XXXX - YANG model for Open Shortest Path First (OSPF).
"RFC XXXX: A YANG data model for OSPF Dense topology";
 reference " RFC XXXX - Dynamic Flooding on Dense Graphs";

whereas XXXX is customarily used as a placeholder for the RFC which the
I-D becomes; I see no reference to the name at the start of the I-D,
namely
YANG Data Model for Dynamic Flooding
which must appear in the IANA Considerations, which it does not as they
are absent.

Also, many lines are too long for an RFC which makes the I-D (too)
difficult to read on a screen.

Tom Petch

----- Original Message -----
From: <tony.li@tony.li>;
To: <lsr@ietf.org>;
Sent: Thursday, September 05, 2019 1:49 AM
Subject: [Lsr] Fwd: New Version Notification for
draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-flooding-00.txt



Hi all,

This is the first draft of a YANG model for Dynamic Flooding.

We welcome your comments.  Please be gentle as we are YANG n00bs.

Regards,
Srinath & Tony


> Begin forwarded message:
>
> From: internet-drafts@ietf.org
> Subject: New Version Notification for
draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-flooding-00.txt
> Date: September 4, 2019 at 5:47:26 PM PDT
> To: "Srinath Dontula" <sd947e@att.com>;, "Tony Li" <tony.li@tony.li>;
>
>
> A new version of I-D, draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-flooding-00.txt
> has been successfully submitted by Tony Li and posted to the
> IETF repository.
>
> Name: draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-flooding
> Revision: 00
> Title: YANG Data Model for Dynamic Flooding
> Document date: 2019-09-03
> Group: Individual Submission
> Pages: 16
> URL:
https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-floo
ding-00.txt
> Status:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-flooding
/
> Htmlized:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-flooding-00
> Htmlized:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-dontula-lsr-yang-dynamic-flo
oding
>
>
> Abstract:
>   This document defins YANG data models that can be used to configure
>   and manage Dynamic Flooding for IS-IS and OSPF.
>
>
>
>
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
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