[Lsr] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-prefix-originator-10: (with COMMENT)

Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 05 April 2021 07:32 UTC

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Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-prefix-originator-10: No Objection

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Thank you for the work put into this document. Easy to see the added value for
trouble shooting !

Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would be
appreciated).

I hope that this helps to improve the document,

Regards,

-éric

Thanks for fixing Warren Kumari's question in the latest -10.

-- Section 1 --
Is the reference to RFC 5329 correct ? I fail to see the link of TE with this
document.

Should it be made clearer that the OSPFv3 router ID is a 32-bit value hence
cannot be used in an IPv6-only network ? "it does not necessarily represent a
reachable address for the router" is slightly ambiguous.

-- Section 2.2 --
Thanks for fixing Warren Kumari's question in the latest -10.

-- Section 4 --
Suggestion: made the sentence "A rogue node that can inject prefix..." in a
separate paragraph.