[Lsr] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-mpls-elc-12: (with COMMENT)

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Subject: [Lsr] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-mpls-elc-12: (with COMMENT)
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Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-isis-mpls-elc-12: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Two editorial nits:
** Section 3.  Editorial.  s/ When a router propagates a prefix between ISIS
levels ([RFC5302],/When a router propagates a prefix between ISIS levels
[RFC5302],/

** Section 4.  Figure 2.  The text says that “A MSD-Type Code 2 has been
assigned by IANA”, but Figure 2 says “MSD-Type=TBD2”.