[Lsr] AD Review of draft-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-msd-15
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Subject: [Lsr] AD Review of draft-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-msd-15
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Dear authors: I just finished reading this document. I have several comments and concerns that I included inline below. While I do have some significant concerns (see below), I don't think there are specific items that prevent the start of the IETF LC (they should not be hard to address), so I'm getting that underway. However, given the close relationship to and dependency on draft-ietf-isis-segment-routing-msd, I will schedule both of them on the same IESG Telechat. Thanks! Alvaro. ... 76 1. Introduction 78 When Segment Routing(SR) paths are computed by a centralized 79 controller, it is critical that the controller learns the Maximum SID 80 Depth(MSD) that can be imposed at each node/link on a given SR path 81 to insure that the SID stack depth of a computed path doesn't exceed 82 the number of SIDs the node is capable of imposing. [nit] s/Depth(MSD)/Depth (MSD) 84 The PCEP SR extensions draft [I-D.ietf-pce-segment-routing] signals 85 MSD in SR PCE Capability TLV and METRIC Object. However, if PCEP is 86 not supported/configured on the head-end of an SR tunnel or a 87 Binding-SID anchor node and controller do not participate in IGP [nit] s/and controller do not participate/and the controller does not participate 88 routing, it has no way to learn the MSD of nodes and links. BGP-LS 89 [RFC7752] defines a way to expose topology and associated attributes 90 and capabilities of the nodes in that topology to a centralized 91 controller. MSD signaling by BGP-LS has been defined in 92 [I-D.ietf-idr-bgp-ls-segment-routing-msd]. Typically, BGP-LS is 93 configured on a small number of nodes that do not necessarily act as 94 head-ends. In order for BGP-LS to signal MSD for all the nodes and 95 links in the network MSD is relevant, MSD capabilites should be 96 advertised by every OSPF router in the network. [nit] s/capabilites/capabilities ... 108 or SIDs associated with another dataplane e.g., IPv6. Although MSD 109 advertisements are associated with Segment Routing, the 110 advertisements MAY be present even if Segment Routing itself is not 111 enabled. [minor] Given that you're using Normative language... It would be nice if you expanded on the use of the MSD in a non-SR network. Something simple such as "a SID and a label are the same thing" would be enough. 113 1.1. Conventions used in this document 115 1.1.1. Terminology [minor] Except for BMI/MSD, the other terms are not definitions, just expansions. Some of the abbreviations are already included in the RFC Editor Abbreviations List [1]. In general, it would be better to just expand on first use (BGP-LS, for example) is used *before* this section than to have this section with expansions. [1] https://www.rfc-editor.org/materials/abbrev.expansion.txt ... 152 2. Node MSD Advertisement 154 The node MSD TLV within the body of the OSPF RI Opaque LSA is defined [nit] A reference to rfc7770 would be nice. 155 to carry the provisioned SID depth of the router originating the RI 156 LSA. Node MSD is the smallest MSD supported by the node on the set 157 of interfaces configured for use by the advertising IGP instance. 158 MSD values may be learned via a hardware API or may be provisioned.. 160 0 1 2 3 161 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 163 +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ 164 | Type | Length | 165 +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ 166 | MSD Type and Value ... 167 +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ ... 169 Figure 1: Node MSD TLV [nit] It would be nicer to display the actual pairs: +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ | MSD-Type | MSD-Value | +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ 171 The Type: TBD1 173 Length: variable (minimum of 2, multiple of 2 octets) and represents 174 the total length of value field. [nit] ...in octets. 176 Value: consists of one or more pairs of a 1 octet MSD-type and 1 177 octet MSD-Value. [nit] There is no "Value" field illustrated above. You might want to reword a little. ... 188 This TLV is applicable to OSPFv2 and to OSPFv3 [RFC5838] and is 189 optional. The scope of the advertisement is specific to the 190 deployment. [minor] I'm confused by the reference to rfc5838. It confuses me because there are no references to the base specs (rfc2328/rfc5340), but (when it seems that one is maybe used) you point at rfc5838 here... 192 When multiple Node MSD TLVs are received from a given router, the 193 receiver MUST use the first occurrence of the TLV in the Router 194 Information LSA. If the Node MSD TLV appears in multiple Router 195 Information LSAs that have different flooding scopes, the Node MSD 196 TLV in the Router Information LSA with the area-scoped flooding scope 197 MUST be used. If the Node MSD TLV appears in multiple Router 198 Information LSAs that have the same flooding scope, the Node MSD TLV 199 in the Router Information (RI) LSA with the numerically smallest 200 Instance ID MUST be used and subsequent instances of the Node MSD TLV 201 MUST be ignored. The RI LSA can be advertised at any of the defined 202 opaque flooding scopes (link, area, or Autonomous System (AS)). For 203 the purpose of Node MSD TLV advertisement, area-scoped flooding is 204 REQUIRED. [major] The text above ends by saying that for the "Node MSD TLV advertisement, area-scoped flooding is REQUIRED". I take that to mean that other scopes are not valid, is that true? If so, then the rules seem to contradict themselves; specifically: "If the Node MSD TLV appears in multiple Router Information LSAs that have the same flooding scope..." seems to imply that receiving the Node MSD TLV in an non-area scoped RI LSAs is ok. 206 3. Link MSD sub-TLV ... 223 Type: 225 For OSPFv2, the Link level MSD value is advertised as an optional 226 Sub-TLV of the OSPFv2 Extended Link TLV as defined in [RFC7684], and 227 has value of TBD2. 229 For OSPFv3, the Link level MSD value is advertised as an optional 230 Sub-TLV of the E-Router-LSA TLV as defined in [RFC8362], and has 231 value of TBD3. [nit] For both OSPFv2/OSPFv3, it would be clearer if "has a type of TBD" (instead of "value") was used. The "value" is used to mean different things in the same sentence. 233 Length: variable and similar to that, defined in Section 2. [major] Similar or the same? 235 Value: consists of one or more pairs of a 1 octet MSD-type and 1 236 octet MSD-Value. [nit] There is no "Value" field illustrated above. You might want to reword a little. ... 248 Other MSD Types are reserved for future extensions. [major] The MSD Types are not defined in this document...so they shouldn't be reserved here... 250 If this TLV is advertised multiple times in the same OSPFv2 Extended 251 Link Opaque LSA, only the first instance of the TLV is used by 252 receiving OSPFv2 routers. This situation SHOULD be logged as an 253 error. [nit] s/this TLV/this sub-TLV [major] Can we make the specification stronger? Maybe "only the first instance MUST be used"... 255 If this TLV is advertised multiple times for the same link in 256 different OSPFv2 Extended Link Opaque LSAs originated by the same 257 OSPFv2 router, the OSPFv2 Extended Link TLV in the OSPFv2 Extended 258 Link Opaque LSA with the smallest Opaque ID is used by receiving 259 OSPFv2 routers. This situation may be logged as a warning. [nit] s/this TLV/this sub-TLV [major] Can we make the specification stronger? Maybe "...with the smallest Opaque ID MUST be used...". [minor] Why is the importance of this last situation less, where a warning may (non-normative) be logged? [major] What about multiples in OSPFv3? 261 4. Using Node and Link MSD Advertisements [major] After reading this section, I still don't know how do use the advertisements. What should a receiver do with the values? Maybe the use is constrained to a controller...maybe the exact operation is our of the scope of this document. Either way, please say something. ... 279 5. Base MPLS Imposition MSD [minor] Even with the pointer to I-D.ietf-isis-segment-routing-msd, this section is not needed in this document because the definition of the MSD-Types is done elsewhere. Please remove it. ... 301 7. Security Considerations 303 Security concerns for OSPF are addressed in [RFC7474]. Further [minor] That's a bold statement! I'm sure those are not the only security concerns... It may be better to just point at the base specifications... 304 security analysis for OSPF protocol is done in [RFC6863] including 305 analysis of both the above documents. Security considerations, as [minor] Which documents? 306 specified by [RFC7770], [RFC7684] and [RFC8362] are applicable to 307 this document. 309 Advertisement of an incorrect MSD value may result: in a path 310 computation failing and the service unavailable or instantiation of a 311 path that can't be supported by the head-end (the node performing the 312 imposition). [major] The paragraph above can also applied to modified information. What about privacy? What are the issues with disclosure of the MSDs? ... 329 10.1. Normative References [minor] I don't think that rfc7474 needs to be Normative. ... 342 [RFC7474] Bhatia, M., Hartman, S., Zhang, D., and A. Lindem, Ed., 343 "Security Extension for OSPFv2 When Using Manual Key 344 Management", RFC 7474, DOI 10.17487/RFC7474, April 2015, 345 <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc7474>. ... 366 10.2. Informative References [nit] rfc8126 is not used. ... 403 [RFC8126] Cotton, M., Leiba, B., and T. Narten, "Guidelines for 404 Writing an IANA Considerations Section in RFCs", BCP 26, 405 RFC 8126, DOI 10.17487/RFC8126, June 2017, 406 <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc8126>.
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