[Lsr] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-mpls-elc-12: (with COMMENT)

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COMMENT:
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Just a few editorial nits:

— Section 1 —

   In cases where LSPs are used (e.g., SR-MPLS [RFC8660], it would be

Nit: you need a closing parenthesis instead of the second comma.

   This capability, referred to as Entropy Readable Label
   Depth (ERLD) as defined in [RFC8662] may be used by ingress LSRs to

Nit: this needs a comma after the citation.

— Section 3 —

   originator.  Similarly in a multi-domain network, the identity of the

Nit: “Similarly” needs a comma after it.

   When a router propagates a prefix between ISIS levels ([RFC5302], it

Nit: remove the open parenthesis.

   an Autonomous System Boundary Router (ASBR) is outside of the scope

Nit: the abbreviation “ASBR” is not used elsewhere in the document, so there’s
no reason to include it.

— Section 4 —

   A new MSD-type [RFC8491], called ERLD-MSD is defined to advertise the

Nit: 8491 capitalizes the “T” in “MSD-Type”.
Nit: there needs to be a comma after “ERLD-MSD”.