Re: [Lsr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-35.txt

tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> Thu, 06 June 2019 16:58 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Lsr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-35.txt
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Stephane

The YANG module has RFC5307 in a description clause but I do not see
this in the References of the I-D

I commented before on the lack of  a conditional when on
     augment "/if:interfaces/if:interface"
so every interface will get this object; is that intended?

In the example, is the system-id one reserved for documentation?

Tom Petch

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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
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> This draft is a work item of the Link State Routing WG of the IETF.
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>         Title           : YANG Data Model for IS-IS Protocol
>         Authors         : Stephane Litkowski
>                           Derek Yeung
>                           Acee Lindem
>                           Jeffrey Zhang
>                           Ladislav Lhotka
> Filename        : draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-35.txt
> Pages           : 111
> Date            : 2019-03-07
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> Abstract:
>    This document defines a YANG data model that can be used to
configure
>    and manage IS-IS protocol on network elements.
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