Re: [Lsr] Shepherd review comments on draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-29

tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> Tue, 22 January 2019 17:31 UTC

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From: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>
To: "stephane.litkowski@orange.com" <stephane.litkowski@orange.com>, "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>, Yingzhen Qu <yingzhen.qu@huawei.com>, "lsr@ietf.org" <lsr@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Lsr] Shepherd review comments on draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-29
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Stephane

Yes, it was the [..] that caught my eye and which, in other cases, has
meant that the author has included the links - I had not checked the
XML.

Tom Petch


---- Original Message -----
From: <stephane.litkowski@orange.com>;
Sent: Tuesday, January 22, 2019 4:18 PM

Hi Tom,

This is plaintext. You can see it in the XML source of the draft, there
is no link in the YANG module.
Is your concern coming from the "[" "]" characters ? Just a copy/paste
from the text version of the boilerplate, but there is no link behind.

-----Original Message-----
From: Lsr [mailto:lsr-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of tom petch
Sent: Tuesday, January 22, 2019 13:48

-32 has the RFC2119 boilerplate in the YANG module - thank you - but...
YANG modules must be plain text and

         "are to be interpreted as described in BCP 14 [RFC2119]
          [RFC8174] when, and only when, they appear in all capitals, as
          shown here."

looks rather like XML/HTML anchors and not plain text.

Time idnits learnt what a YANG module looks like!

Tom Petch

----- Original Message -----
From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>;
Sent: Monday, January 21, 2019 9:07 PM

> Hi Yingzhen,
> All the idnits warnings are fixed in the -32 version of the drafts.
> Thanks,
> Acee
>
> From: Yingzhen Qu <yingzhen.qu@huawei.com>;
> Date: Friday, January 18, 2019 at 5:35 PM

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