Re: [Lsr] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-41: (with COMMENT)

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From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>
To: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-41: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [Lsr] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-41: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Ben,
Thanks again for the detailed review. I've made the editorial changes below in the -42 version.
Thanks,
Acee

´╗┐On 10/15/19, 1:38 AM, "Benjamin Kaduk via Datatracker" <noreply@ietf.org>; wrote:

    Benjamin Kaduk has entered the following ballot position for
    draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-41: No Objection
    
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    Thanks for the updates in the -41!
    I think that "i-e" in the following got missed, but that can probably be done with an
    RFC Editor note, so I'm clearing my Discuss:
    
         grouping neighbor {
           description  "IS-IS standard neighbor grouping.";
           leaf neighbor-id {
             type extended-system-id;
             description "IS-IS neighbor system-id";
           }
          container instances {
             description "List of all adjacencies between the local
                          system and the neighbor system-id.";
             list instance {
               key id;
    
               leaf id {
                 type uint32;
                 description "Unique identifier of an instance of a
                              particular neighbor.";
               }
               leaf i-e {
                 type boolean;
                 description
                   "Internal or External (I/E) Metric bit value";
               }
    
    Also, I think that a spurious 'd' got added into "Routing Information Based".