Re: [Lsr] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-37

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From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>
To: Stewart Bryant <stewart.bryant@gmail.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Lsr] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-37
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Thanks Stewart - we will fix this nit in the -38 version. 
Acee

´╗┐On 9/18/19, 10:14 AM, "Stewart Bryant via Datatracker" <noreply@ietf.org>; wrote:

    Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
    Review result: Ready
    
    I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
    Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
    by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
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    Document: draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-??
    Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
    Review Date: 2019-09-18
    IETF LC End Date: 2019-09-23
    IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
    
    Summary: A true magnum opus. Well written and from a GENART point of view ready
    to be published. I have not checked the YANG syntax, and have only checked that
    the configuration symantics look plausible. I assume that specalist YANG and
    Routing reviewers will look at that detail.
    
    Major issues: None
    
    Minor issues: None
    
    Nits/editorial comments:
       This document defines a YANG data model that can be used to configure
       and manage IS-IS protocol on network elements.
    
    SB> s/manage/manage the/