Re: [Lsr] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-mpls-elc-12: (with COMMENT)

Peter Psenak <ppsenak@cisco.com> Wed, 20 May 2020 08:38 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Lsr] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-mpls-elc-12: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Roman,

On 20/05/2020 00:01, Roman Danyliw via Datatracker wrote:
> Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-isis-mpls-elc-12: No Objection
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> Two editorial nits:
> ** Section 3.  Editorial.  s/ When a router propagates a prefix between ISIS
> levels ([RFC5302],/When a router propagates a prefix between ISIS levels
> [RFC5302],/

I must be missing something, but what's the diff between the original 
and proposed text?

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> ** Section 4.  Figure 2.  The text says that “A MSD-Type Code 2 has been
> assigned by IANA”, but Figure 2 says “MSD-Type=TBD2”.

the figure 2 has been removed based on the previous comments.

thanks,
Peter
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