[Lsr] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-ospf-yang-26: (with COMMENT)

Mirja Kühlewind via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 19 August 2019 16:25 UTC

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Mirja Kühlewind has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-ospf-yang-26: No Objection

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Just two quick questions about references:

- Is there no reference for mtu-ignore (see section 2.4)? If not, can you
further describe what exactly would be disabled?

- Also is there no reference for OSPF Non-Stop Routing (NSR) (see section
2.4)...?

And one more comment:

In the interface-common-config part (p76 and p77) you provide example or
default values for various intervals and delays. Where does those values come
from? Would it be possible to provide a reference/RFC that specifies actual
default values? Especially when you specify something normatively ("The value
MUST be greater than 'hello-interval'.") it would be good to provide a
reference!  Do any specification maybe also specify min and max value? If so,
you should mention them here as well! If not would it make sense to recommend
min and max values? If possible I would strongly support to describe min and
max values as well!