Re: [Lsr] Shepherd review comments on draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-29

Ladislav Lhotka <lhotka@nic.cz> Wed, 23 January 2019 09:09 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Lsr] Shepherd review comments on draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-29
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Hi St├ęphane,

the problem is in the source of the "ietf-isis" module inside <artwork>: the
chevrons enclosing email addresses should be encoded as XML entities &lt; and
&gt; but what I see there is &amp;lt; and &amp;gt;

Lada

On Tue, 2019-01-22 at 16:18 +0000, stephane.litkowski@orange.com wrote:
> Hi Tom,
> 
> This is plaintext. You can see it in the XML source of the draft, there is no
> link in the YANG module.
> Is your concern coming from the "[" "]" characters ? Just a copy/paste from
> the text version of the boilerplate, but there is no link behind.
> 
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Lsr [mailto:lsr-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of tom petch
> Sent: Tuesday, January 22, 2019 13:48
> To: Acee Lindem (acee); Yingzhen Qu; lsr@ietf.org; 
> draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Lsr] Shepherd review comments on draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-
> 29
> 
> -32 has the RFC2119 boilerplate in the YANG module - thank you - but...
> YANG modules must be plain text and
> 
>          "are to be interpreted as described in BCP 14 [RFC2119]
>           [RFC8174] when, and only when, they appear in all capitals, as
>           shown here."
> 
> looks rather like XML/HTML anchors and not plain text.
> 
> Time idnits learnt what a YANG module looks like!
> 
> Tom Petch
> 
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>;
> To: "Yingzhen Qu" <yingzhen.qu@huawei.com>;; <lsr@ietf.org>;;
> <draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg@ietf.org>;
> Sent: Monday, January 21, 2019 9:07 PM
> Subject: Re: [Lsr] Shepherd review comments on
> draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-29
> 
> 
> > Hi Yingzhen,
> > All the idnits warnings are fixed in the -32 version of the drafts.
> > Thanks,
> > Acee
> > 
> > From: Yingzhen Qu <yingzhen.qu@huawei.com>;
> > Date: Friday, January 18, 2019 at 5:35 PM
> > To: "lsr@ietf.org"; <lsr@ietf.org>;,
> "draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg@ietf.org";
> <draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg@ietf.org>;
> > Subject: Shepherd review comments on draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-29
> > Resent-From: <alias-bounces@ietf.org>;
> > Resent-To: Stephane Litkowski <stephane.litkowski@orange.com>;, Derek
> Yeung <derek@arrcus.com>;, Acee Lindem <acee@cisco.com>;, Jeffrey Zhang
> <zzhang@juniper.
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