Re: [Lsr] [Teas] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5316bis

"Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" <ginsberg@cisco.com> Wed, 03 March 2021 23:29 UTC

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From: "Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" <ginsberg@cisco.com>
To: Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>, Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.ietf@gmail.com>, Christian Hopps <chopps@chopps.org>
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Subject: Re: [Lsr] [Teas] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5316bis
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Alvaro –

Your comment was to put quotes:

<snip>
I would recommend using quotes in the appendix:

OLD>
   1.  The Router ID SHOULD be identical to the value advertised in the
   Traffic Engineering Router ID TLV (134) if available.

NEW>
   1.  The "Router ID SHOULD be identical" to the value advertised in the
   Traffic Engineering Router ID TLV (134) if available (Section 3.1).


<end snip>

My response was:

<snip>
[Les:] So I am willing to make the change. But I have to say that for me as a reader the use of quotes as you suggest does not aid clarity.
I have no idea why the entire sentence should not be quoted as without the unquoted portion of the sentence the meaning of the quoted part is incomplete.
<end snip>

Now you point out that the body of the text says “[RFC5305]” whereas the appendix says “TLV 134”.
Fine – I can make them consistent.
Now, can you respond to my comment regarding the lack of clarity in using quotes?

Thanx.

   Les


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Subject: RE: [Lsr] [Teas] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5316bis

Les:

The text is not the same:

§3.1 reads: "The Router ID SHOULD be identical to the value advertised in the Traffic Engineering Router ID TLV [RFC5305].”

I’m sure you’ll do the right thing.

Thanks!

Alvaro.


On March 3, 2021 at 3:54:42 PM, Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) (ginsberg@cisco.com<mailto:ginsberg@cisco.com>) wrote:
> OLD>
>    1.  The Router ID SHOULD be identical to the value advertised in the
>    Traffic Engineering Router ID TLV (134) if available.
>
> NEW>
>    1.  The "Router ID SHOULD be identical" to the value advertised in the
>    Traffic Engineering Router ID TLV (134) if available (Section 3.1).
>

[Les:] So I am willing to make the change. But I have to say that for me as a reader the use of quotes as you suggest does not aid clarity.
I have no idea why the entire sentence should not be quoted as without the unquoted portion of the sentence the meaning of the quoted part is incomplete.