Re: [Lsr] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-ospf-yang-26: (with COMMENT)

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 21 August 2019 20:25 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Lsr] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-ospf-yang-26: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Acee,

> On Aug 21, 2019, at 1:01 PM, Acee Lindem (acee) <acee@cisco.com>; wrote:
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> Hi Alissa,
> 
> On 8/21/19, 9:29 AM, "Alissa Cooper via Datatracker" <noreply@ietf.org>; wrote:
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>    Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
>    draft-ietf-ospf-yang-26: No Objection
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>    COMMENT:
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> 
>    Per the Gen-ART review, I think 2.3 may be a little clearer if it were to say
>    "The field 'version' is used to indicate the OSPF LSA version and is mandatory."
> 
> This change has already been made in response to the Gen-ART review.

My specific suggestion was to include “LSA” after “OSPF” since that seemed to be the source of the confusion.

Best,
Alissa

> 
> 2.3.  OSPFv2 and OSPFv3
> 
>   The data model defined herein supports both OSPFv2 and OSPFv3.
> 
>   The field 'version' is used to indicate the OSPF version and is
>   mandatory.  Based on the configured version, the data model varies to
>   accommodate the differences between OSPFv2 and OSPFv3.
> 
> Thanks,
> Acee
> 
>    I did not review this entire document but I'm balloting based on the Gen-ART
>    review.
> 
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