Re: [Lsr] Shepherd review comments on draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-29

[Yingzhen Qu <[e-mail]>]

Great. Let me double check and upload the shepherd write-up to data tracker.

Thanks,
Yingzhen

From: Acee Lindem (acee) [mailto:[e-mail]]
Sent: Monday, January 21, 2019 1:08 PM
To: Yingzhen Qu <[e-mail]>; [e-mail]; [e-mail]
Subject: Re: Shepherd review comments on draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-29

Hi Yingzhen,
All the idnits warnings are fixed in the -32 version of the drafts.
Thanks,
Acee

From: Yingzhen Qu <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>
Date: Friday, January 18, 2019 at 5:35 PM
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Subject: Shepherd review comments on draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-29
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Hi Authors,

Here are some comments I have based on draft version 29.

Here are the warnings from “idnits”. To resolve those unused reference issue, I’d suggest to use what’s done in the ospf model draft, beginning of Section 3.

idnits 2.16.01

/tmp/draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-29.txt:
/tmp/draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-29.txt(273): Line has weird spacing: '...-method    str...'
/tmp/draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-29.txt(733): Line has weird spacing: '...-family    ian...'
/tmp/draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-29.txt(1238): Code start at 1238: <CODE BEGINS> file "[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>".
/tmp/draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-29.txt(5568): Line has weird spacing: '... system  recei...'
/tmp/draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-29.txt(5671): Code end at 5671: <CODE ENDS>.


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Nits:

·        The draft title “protocol” should start with capital letter P.

·        I don’t think the word “container” is needed here:

420        The IS-IS configuration container is divided in:



422        o  Global parameters.



424        o  Per interface configuration (see Section 2.4).


·        Should be “raised”

978         if-state-change: raise when the state of an interface changes.

·        “the system finds”

980         corrupted-lsp-detected: raised when the system find that an LSP

981         that was stored in memory has become corrupted.

·        I’d suggest change it to “isis” container, instead of configuration container. Or maybe change it to “isis module” to be consistent with the next following paragraph.

1033        The "isis" configuration container augments the "/rt:routing/

·        Repetition of section 2.5
1049        The modules defined in this document use some groupings from ietf-
1050        keychain [RFC8177].

·        I’d suggest to change to “This YANG module” to be consistent with the beginning of the description.
1154        This YANG model conforms to the Network Management

·        Typo
4888     For IS-IS authentication, configuration is supported vua the

·        In IANA consideration, the registrant contact should be “The IESG”

4914                URI: urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-isis

4915                Registrant Contact: IS-IS WG

4916                XML: N/A, the requested URI is an XML namespace





Thanks,

Yingzhen