Re: [Lsr] WG Adoption Poll for IGP extension for PCEP security capability support in the PCE discovery - draft-wu-lsr-pce-discovery-security-support-00

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Hi,

Contributor hat on, I take the opportunity mentioned by Acee to
highlight some of the issues in the current version:
- The I-D teaches multiple time about RFC 5088 and 5089 (while 8253 is
only mentioned in the introduction): the discussed mechanism has been
used multiple times, there is no need to elaborate so much (see section
3.1.1 of RFC 8306 for example);
- Section 3 includes the PCE-CAP-FLAGS sub-TLV definition: having a
given specification in multiples places brings no value but may create
discrepancies, please stick to the references to the aforementioned RFCs;
- Section 3 tries to list the existing flag allocations: these are
inaccurate (e.g. RFC 6006 has been obsoleted by RFC 8306), incomplete
(e.g. RFC 8231 is missing) and inappropriate (this is the role of the
IANA registry, not of every new I-D!);
- Contrary to the written text, the I-D does not "extend" anything, it
requests bit allocation from an existing registry; the IANA section (7)
is thus key: please make it point to the relevant registry, namely "PCE
Capability Flags" managed within the "OSPFv2 Parameters"
(https://www.iana.org/assignments/ospfv2-parameters/ospfv2-parameters.xml#ospfv2-parameters-14).

Thanks,

Julien


On 13/11/2018 23:10, Acee Lindem (acee) wrote:
> Note the authors may refresh the draft to address some comments prior
> to that time. 


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