[Lsr] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc7810bis-03: (with COMMENT)
Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Mon, 17 December 2018 20:37 UTC
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Subject: [Lsr] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc7810bis-03: (with COMMENT)
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Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc7810bis-03: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc7810bis/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- In section 13 it seems a little awkward to reference the "first version" and "second version" of the document since they will be published with different RFC numbers. Might be clearer to say RFC 7810 in the first instance and "this document" in the second instance.
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