Re: [Lsr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ospf-yang-14.txt

tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> Fri, 31 August 2018 11:53 UTC

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From: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>
To: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>, "lsr@ietf.org" <lsr@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Lsr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ospf-yang-14.txt
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Acee

-15 looks ok

Tom Petch


----- Original Message -----
From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>
Sent: Wednesday, August 29, 2018 2:07 PM

> Hi Tom,
> I believe I've fixed these in the -15 version. I see I have down
references in the IDNITs which I will address in a future version.
> Thanks again for your review,
> Acee
>
> On 8/29/18, 8:01 AM, "tom petch" <ietfc@btconnect.com> wrote:
>
>     Acee
>
>     Thank you for the list of features in s.2.4; much appreciated.  A
couple
>     of minor editorial tweaks perhaps to
>
>     11. admin-control> Support Administrative control of the protocol
>     26. bfd: Support BFD detection of OSPF neighbor reachability
>             [RFC5880], xref target="RFC5881"/>
>
>     With the BFD reference, yes, I like
>            reference "RFC YYYY - YANG Data Model for Bidirectional
>     but would still add a Note to the RFC Editor asking them to
replace YYYY
>     with the assigned RFC number for
>        [I-D.ietf-bfd-yang]
>     (which is how it appears in the Normative References).
>
>     And you still have a
>     link-state database
>     in
>     rpc clear-database
>     which I prefer to be
>     Link State Database
>
>     Tom Petch
>
>     ----- Original Message -----
>     From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee=40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org>
>     To: <lsr@ietf.org>
>     Sent: Tuesday, August 28, 2018 6:34 PM
>
>     > This version addresses Tom Petch's last call comments.
>     > Thanks,
>     > Acee
>     >
>     > On 8/28/18, 1:10 PM, "Lsr on behalf of internet-drafts@ietf.org"
>     <lsr-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of internet-drafts@ietf.org>
wrote:
>     >
>     >
>     >     A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line
Internet-Drafts
>     directories.
>     >     This draft is a work item of the Link State Routing WG of
the
>     IETF.
>     >
>     >             Title           : Yang Data Model for OSPF Protocol
>     >             Authors         : Derek Yeung
>     >                               Yingzhen Qu
>     >                               Jeffrey Zhang
>     >                               Ing-Wher Chen
>     >                               Acee Lindem
>     >     Filename        : draft-ietf-ospf-yang-14.txt
>     >     Pages           : 115
>     >     Date            : 2018-08-28
>     >
>     >     Abstract:
>     >        This document defines a YANG data model that can be used
to
>     configure
>     >        and manage OSPF.  The model is based on YANG 1.1 as
defined in
>     RFC
>     >        7950 and conforms to the Network Management Datastore
>     Architecture
>     >        (NDMA) as described in RFC 8342.
>     >
>     >
>     >     The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>     >     https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ospf-yang/
>     >
>     >     There are also htmlized versions available at:
>     >     https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ospf-yang-14
>     >
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ospf-yang-14
>     >
>     >     A diff from the previous version is available at:
>     >     https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ospf-yang-14
>     >
>     >
>     >     Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the
time of
>     submission
>     >     until the htmlized version and diff are available at
>     tools.ietf.org.
>     >
>     >     Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>     >     ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>     >
>
>
>
>