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Re: [Lsr] WG last call for draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-terminology-00

Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.ietf@gmail.com> Fri, 24 June 2022 05:30 UTC

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From: Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 24 Jun 2022 11:00:00 +0530
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Subject: Re: [Lsr] WG last call for draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-terminology-00
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Hi WG,

I support progressing this towards publication.

Some comments -

- The header and main body claim that 7 RFCs are being updated whereas the
abstract and introduction only cite two.
- It is good to add an informational reference for inclusive language in
the introduction -- may be NISTIR8366 (which is referred to in the IESG
statement on inclusive language)

Thanks!
Dhruv


On Sun, Jun 5, 2022 at 3:25 PM Christian Hopps <chopps@chopps.org> wrote:

> Given the simplicity of this document and having received no objections or
> edits prior to or during the adoption call we'll be moving it immediately
> to WGLC...
>
> This begins a 2 week WG Last Call, ending Jun 19th, 2022, for:
>
>   https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-terminology/
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> Authors,
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> work.
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> Thanks,
> Chris.
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