Re: [Lsr] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5306bis-06: (with COMMENT)

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From: "Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" <ginsberg@cisco.com>
To: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Lsr] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5306bis-06: (with COMMENT)
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Roman -

Thanx for the review.
I have uploaded V7 of the draft to address your comments.

Responses inline.

> -----Original Message-----
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> Subject: Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc5306bis-06:
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> Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
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> COMMENT:
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> (1) Section 3.1.  The two “NOTE” statements in this section seem to conflict:
> -- NOTE: These timers are NOT applicable to a router which is preparing to do
> a
> planned restart.
> 
> -- NOTE: The timer T3 is only used by a restarting router.

[Les:] I have added text indicating that T1/T2 can be used both by a restarting router and starting router (details were already provided in the respective sections later in the document) but that T3 is only used by a restarting router.
The second NOTE has been deleted.

> 
> (2) Per the definition of the “Remaining Time” field, when is it the “remaining
> holding time” vs. “recommended holding time"

[Les:] I have removed the term "recommended" which is not otherwise used in the document.

> 
> (3) Editorial Nits:
> -- Multiple places.  s/signalling/signaling/g

[Les:] It depends whether you are British or not. 😊
As the original lead author of RFC 5306 was British I have conformed to the British spelling.
If you think that is not right, I suggest we let the RFC Editor decide.

    Les

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