[Lsvr] Minor fixes for draft-ietf-lsvr-bgp-spf-06 and draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl-02
Matt Anderson <matt@mattanderson.net> Tue, 01 October 2019 18:16 UTC
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Subject: [Lsvr] Minor fixes for draft-ietf-lsvr-bgp-spf-06 and draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl-02
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Proofreading notes from reading these drafts. draft-ietf-lsvr-bgp-spf-06 - section 2.2 - “… there will be the same unnumber of sessions” should read “number”. - section 3.0 - “AF 16388” probably should read “AFI” - section 4.2.1 - “Link NLIR endpoint prefixes and 1-128 for IPv6” should read “NLRI” - section 8.1 - “configuratio” missing an ’n’ draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl-02 - section 3 - “widrawal” should be “withdrawal” - section 18.1 - Need to add a word or two after “interfaces” to fix the grammar, or elsewhere in the sentence. “Therefore, on multi-link interfaces MUST continue to send HELLOs as long as they are turned up.”
- [Lsvr] Minor fixes for draft-ietf-lsvr-bgp-spf-06… Matt Anderson
- Re: [Lsvr] Minor fixes for draft-ietf-lsvr-bgp-sp… Randy Bush
- Re: [Lsvr] Minor fixes for draft-ietf-lsvr-bgp-sp… Acee Lindem (acee)