Re: [Lsvr] Minor fixes for draft-ietf-lsvr-bgp-spf-06 and draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl-02

Randy Bush <randy@psg.com> Tue, 01 October 2019 19:23 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Lsvr] Minor fixes for draft-ietf-lsvr-bgp-spf-06 and draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl-02
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> draft-ietf-lsvr-l3dl-02
> - section 3 - “widrawal” should be “withdrawal”
> - section 18.1 - Need to add a word or two after “interfaces” to fix the
> grammar, or elsewhere in the sentence.  “Therefore, on multi-link
> interfaces MUST continue to send HELLOs as long as they are turned up.”

thanks!

randy