Re: [Lwip] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lwig-minimal-esp-10.txt

Hi,

Thanks Paul for the comments. Please find my response below:
https://github.com/mglt/draft-mglt-lwig-minimal-esp/pull/3

The main question I have is regarding the use of normative language in an
informational document. I would liek some guidance from the IESG so I can
implement the changes.

Yours,
Daniel

On Fri, Apr 8, 2022 at 3:21 PM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Light-Weight Implementation Guidance WG
> of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : Minimal IP Encapsulating Security Payload (ESP)
>         Authors         : Daniel Migault
>                           Tobias Guggemos
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-lwig-minimal-esp-10.txt
>         Pages           : 15
>         Date            : 2022-04-08
>
> Abstract:
>    This document describes the minimal properties IP Encapsulating
>    Security Payload (ESP) implementation needs to meet to remain
>    interoperable with the standard RFC4303 ESP.  Such a minimal version
>    of ESP is not intended to become a replacement of the RFC 4303 ESP.
>    Instead, a minimal implementation is expected to be optimized for
>    constrained environment while remaining interoperable with
>    implementations of RFC 4303 ESP.  In addition, this document also
>    provides some considerations to implement minimal ESP in a
>    constrained environment which includes limiting the number of flash
>    writes, handling frequent wakeup / sleep states, limiting wakeup
>    time, or reducing the use of random generation.
>
>    This document does not update or modify RFC 4303, but provides a
>    compact description of how to implement the minimal version of the
>    protocol.  RFC 4303 remains the authoritative description.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lwig-minimal-esp/
>
> There is also an htmlized version available at:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-lwig-minimal-esp-10
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-lwig-minimal-esp-10
>
>
> Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org:
> :internet-drafts
>
>
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Daniel Migault
Ericsson