[Lwip] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lwig-curve-representations-12

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Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Almost Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-lwig-curve-representations-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2020-09-06
IETF LC End Date: 2020-09-08
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is almost ready for publication as Informational RFC

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
I am wondering about the appendixes of this document, I did not see and
references for them but for example doing search on the Internet I noticed that
https://nvlpubs.nist.gov/nistpubs/SpecialPublications/NIST.SP.800-186-draft.pdf
has the same text as appendix A. Which one is the source.