Re: [manet] I-D Action: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-lid-extension-01.txt

Victoria Pritchard <pritchardv0@gmail.com> Wed, 31 January 2018 22:02 UTC

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Subject: Re: [manet] I-D Action: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-lid-extension-01.txt
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Hi Rick,

The new text is good, this is a well written draft, clear and easy to read.

Only issue I can see is "it does not with to use" in section 3.1 - do you
mean "it does not wish to use"?

Regards,
Vicky.


On 30 January 2018 at 20:52, Rick Taylor <rick@tropicalstormsoftware.com>
wrote:

> Hi All
>
> I have pushed out a new version of the link is draft. This version has
> some minor text improvements hopefully clarifying some behavior.
>
> Any reviews gratefully received, as I'd like to push for last call as I
> know people are looking to implement
>
> Cheers
>
> Rick
>
> (Sent from my phone)
>
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> Subject: [manet] I-D Action: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-lid-extension-01.txt
> Date: Tue, Jan 30, 2018 14:07
>
>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Mobile Ad-hoc Networks WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : Link Identifier Extension to DLEP
>         Authors         : Rick Taylor
>                           Stan Ratliff
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-manet-dlep-lid-extension-01.txt
>         Pages           : 8
>         Date            : 2018-01-30
>
> Abstract:
>    There exists a class of modems that wish to support the Dynamic Link
>    Exchange Protocol (DLEP) [RFC8175] but do not present a single Layer
>    2 network domain as required by DLEP.  Such devices may be:
>
>    o  Modems that maintain a varying link to some upstream backbone
>       network infrastructure, where the ability to announce link state
>       and DLEP metrics is desired, but the concept of a DLEP destination
>       router for the backbone does not apply.  Examples of such devices
>       can include LTE modems, IEEE 802.11 stations not in ad-hoc mode,
>       and some satellite terminals.
>
>    o  Modems that provide Layer 3 wide area network connectivity between
>       devices, where individual DLEP destinations do exist, but are not
>       directly reachable by MAC address.
>
>    This document introduces an optional extension to the core DLEP
>    specification, allowing DLEP to be used between routers and modems
>    that operate in this way.
>
>    Note:
>
>    o  This document is intended as an extension to the core DLEP
>       specification, and readers are expected to be fully conversant
>       with the operation of core DLEP.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-manet-dlep-lid-extension/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-manet-dlep-lid-extension-01
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-manet-
> dlep-lid-extension-01
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-manet-dlep-lid-extension-01
>
>
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
> submission
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