Re: [manet] Suresh Krishnan's Discuss on draft-ietf-manet-dlep-26: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com> Tue, 31 January 2017 10:08 UTC

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Subject: Re: [manet] Suresh Krishnan's Discuss on draft-ietf-manet-dlep-26: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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Thanks Stan. I have cleared.

Regards
Suresh

On 1/31/17, 4:30 AM, "Stan Ratliff" <ratliffstan@gmail.com> wrote:

    Suresh, 
    
    
    Thank you for the review comments. We have submitted DLEP-27, and we believe it addresses your concerns. Additional information inline: 
    
    On Wed, Dec 14, 2016 at 12:22 AM, Suresh Krishnan 
    <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com> wrote:
    
    Suresh Krishnan has entered the following ballot position for
    draft-ietf-manet-dlep-26: Discuss
    
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    DISCUSS:
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    * Section 11.7
    The MAC address encoding on the wire seems to be wrong. Instead of using
    6 bytes for MAC-48 the document seems to using 8 bytes. Similarly for
    EUI-64 the document seems to be using 12 bytes instead of 8. Please fix
    this (Also Note that the length values specified under the format of the
    data item seem to be correct i.e. 6 & 8 - it is the data item format that
    is wrong)
    
    
    
    
    
    Corrected the ASCII art. 
     
    
    
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    COMMENT:
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    * Sections 11.2, 11.3, 11.9 and 11.10
    The IPv4 and IPv6 addresses do not seem to be aligned on word boundaries.
    Didn't you face any inefficiencies/difficulties due to this in your
    implementations (I saw there were four independent ones)?
    
    
    
    
    Due to the nature of TLV processing, and the fact that DLEP does not place ordering constraints on TLVs, the notion of alignment was pretty much given up long ago. Since DLEP is a control plane protocol, the performance penalties are not deemed sufficiently
     painful (e.g., there's just not enough traffic for it to be a huge problem). 
     
    
    
    * Section 11.11.1
    Agree with Alia's point that there seems to be a typo in "IPv4 Attached
    Subnet"
    
    
    
    
    Fixed. 
    
    
    Regards,
    Stan
     
    
    
    
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