[manet] Re: Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension-18

[Donald Eastlake <[e-mail]>]

Hi,

On Fri, Aug 2, 2024 at 6:38 AM Giuseppe Fioccola via Datatracker
<[e-mail]> wrote:
>
> Reviewer: Giuseppe Fioccola
> Review result: Ready
>
> This document is well written and clear for its scope.

Thanks.

> This I-D, together with draft-ietf-manet-dlep-credit-flow-control and
> draft-ietf-manet-dlep-traffic-classification, specify a DiffServ-aware credit
> window based flow control scheme as a new extension to DLEP (RFC 8175).

We are working on resolving comments and revising all of these drafts.

> From an OPSDIR point of view, the document includes a dedicated section on
> Management Considerations. Since I also looked at the companions
> draft-ietf-manet-dlep-credit-flow-control and
> draft-ietf-manet-dlep-traffic-classification, I think that some details about
> the implementation can be provided. It would be good to mention or give
> examples on how the different parameters can be configured and how the
> information can possibly be exported. This suggestion mainly applies to the
> companion documents, which are normative references for this I-D.

OK.

> As an editorial comment for this I-D, you can consider to include a figure with
> the Extension Data Item or you can simply add a reference to section 13.6 of
> RFC 8175 somewhere.

We will plan to do that.

Thanks,
Donald
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