[manet] AD Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-latency-extension-04
Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com> Fri, 21 June 2019 20:07 UTC
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Subject: [manet] AD Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-latency-extension-04
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Dear authors: I just finished reading this document. Sorry for the processing delay. I have only one issue. I'm starting the IETF Last Call because I believe we can take care of it with other LC comments. >From §3: "The Latency Range Data Item MAY be carried in any message where the Latency Data Item [RFC8175] is allowed and is carried as an additional data item." There is an exception to the "MAY be carried" part above; rfc8175 §12.6 (Session Initialization Response Message) says: All supported metric Data Items MUST be included in the Session Initialization Response Message, with default values to be used on a session-wide basis. This can be viewed as the modem "declaring" all supported metrics at DLEP session initialization. Receipt of any further DLEP Message containing a metric Data Item not included in the Session Initialization Response Message MUST be treated as an error, resulting in the termination of the DLEP session between router and modem. If any optional extensions are supported by the modem, they MUST be enumerated in the Extensions Supported Data Item. If an Extensions Supported Data Item does not exist in a Session Initialization Response Message, the router MUST conclude that there is no support for extensions in the modem. IOW, the Latency Range MUST be carried in the Session Initialization Response Message. Please add text to that effect. Thanks! Alvaro.
- [manet] AD Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-latenc… Alvaro Retana
- Re: [manet] AD Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-la… Lou Berger