[manet] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-manet-dlep-multi-hop-extension-06: (with COMMENT)

Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 30 April 2019 20:55 UTC

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Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-manet-dlep-multi-hop-extension-06: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Clear and easy to read.

  == NITS ==

 Section 1, there is a dangling ". example using ."

 Section 3.2, the use of a 16-bit value for Hop Control Action suggest that
 there could be more than 4 values (indeed there is a IANA request for a
 registry for this field), suggest to mention that there could be more than 4
 values in this section