Re: [manet] AD Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-multi-hop-extension-05
Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com> Fri, 15 March 2019 15:47 UTC
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Subject: Re: [manet] AD Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-multi-hop-extension-05
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On March 8, 2019 at 9:54:24 AM, Lou Berger (lberger@labn.net) wrote: Lou: Hi! Thanks for getting this done. I have a couple of nits below — and will also send a reply to your exchange with Justin. I’ll start the IETF LC in a couple of minutes. Alvaro. ... ... >> 72 1. Introduction >> ... >> 80 Some modem technologies support connectivity to destinations via >> 81 multi-hop forwarding. DLEP Destination messages can be used to >> 82 report such connectivity, see [RFC8175], but do not provide any >> 83 information related to the number or capacity of the hops. The >> 84 extension defined in this document enables modems to inform routers >> 85 when multi-hop forwarding is being used, and routers to request that >> 86 modems change multi-hop forwarding behavior. The extension defined >> 87 in this document is referred to as "Multi-Hop Forwarding". >> >> [major] Please define "multi-hop forwarding" in the context of the modems. >> >> Done, please see the changes at the repo posted above and let me know if the changes are sufficient. Yes, I think that’s fine. Just a nit: there’s some orphaned text (“example using”) left in the new text. ... >> 166 Reserved: >> >> 168 MUST be set to zero by the sender (a modem) and ignored by the >> 169 receiver (a router). >> >> [major] I think that a registry for these bits is needed. Otherwise >> anyone can use them... >> >> My inclination would be to establish a registry on the second usage of the reserved field. Right now I don't see additional uses and it seems like a lot of unneeded overhead at this point. Of course, you're the AD so your view counts for more ;-) …but you still didn’t define the registry. :-( Seriously: it’s ok. I trust that the next user will do the right thing.
- [manet] AD Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-multi-… Alvaro Retana
- Re: [manet] AD Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-mu… Alvaro Retana
- Re: [manet] AD Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-mu… Lou Berger
- Re: [manet] AD Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-mu… Justin Dean
- Re: [manet] AD Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-mu… Lou Berger
- Re: [manet] AD Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-mu… Alvaro Retana
- Re: [manet] AD Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-mu… Alvaro Retana
- Re: [manet] AD Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-mu… Lou Berger
- Re: [manet] AD Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-mu… Velt, R. (Ronald) in 't
- Re: [manet] AD Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-mu… Lou Berger