Re: [Masque] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-masque-h3-datagram-10: (with COMMENT)
David Schinazi <dschinazi.ietf@gmail.com> Thu, 16 June 2022 16:45 UTC
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From: David Schinazi <dschinazi.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 16 Jun 2022 09:45:08 -0700
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To: Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>
Cc: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-masque-h3-datagram@ietf.org, masque-chairs@ietf.org, MASQUE <masque@ietf.org>, Christopher Wood <caw@heapingbits.net>
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Subject: Re: [Masque] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-masque-h3-datagram-10: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Lars, thanks for your review. Responses inline. David On Thu, Jun 16, 2022 at 5:47 AM Lars Eggert via Datatracker < noreply@ietf.org> wrote: > ### Inclusive language > > Found terminology that should be reviewed for inclusivity; see > https://www.rfc-editor.org/part2/#inclusive_language for background and > more > guidance: > > * Term `natively`; alternatives might be `built-in`, `fundamental`, > `ingrained`, `intrinsic`, `original` > Agreed. Fixed via this commit: https://github.com/ietf-wg-masque/draft-ietf-masque-h3-datagram/commit/118e9d55150d38659bd23bb6a3f88f848bda1823 #### Section 2.1, paragraph 8 > ``` > eived with a value that is neither 0 or 1, the receiver MUST terminate the > c > ^^ > ``` > Use "nor" with neither. > Agreed. Fixed via this commit: https://github.com/ietf-wg-masque/draft-ietf-masque-h3-datagram/commit/7736b08d888757e06c3b884f40708a65827382a4 #### Section 3.2, paragraph 16 > ``` > ied to be self-consistent. If the receive side of a stream carrying > capsules > ^^^^^^^ > ``` > Did you mean the noun "reception" (= the act of receiving) or "receipt" (= > invoice)? Or use "receive-side"? > "Receive side" matches terminology from RFC 9000, so I'd keep it as-is.
- [Masque] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf… Lars Eggert via Datatracker
- Re: [Masque] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-… David Schinazi