Re: [Masque] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-masque-connect-udp-14: (with COMMENT)
David Schinazi <dschinazi.ietf@gmail.com> Thu, 16 June 2022 18:39 UTC
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From: David Schinazi <dschinazi.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 16 Jun 2022 11:39:02 -0700
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To: Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>
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Subject: Re: [Masque] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-masque-connect-udp-14: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Lars, thanks for your review. Responses inline. David On Thu, Jun 16, 2022 at 5:40 AM Lars Eggert via Datatracker < noreply@ietf.org> wrote: > ### Section 3.1, paragraph 0 > ``` > 3.1. UDP Proxy Handling > ``` > This section as well as Section 6 later in the document have some overlap > with > the guidance in RFC8085, specifically, its Section 3. It might be good to > align > the guidance. > Good point, I've added a reference in this commit: https://github.com/ietf-wg-masque/draft-ietf-masque-connect-udp/commit/32c72fc7db2d833f3b8c3f44df8ff4c016248c41 #### Section 3.1, paragraph 3 > ``` > her the destination is reachable. Therefore it needs to respond to the > reques > ^^^^^^^^^ > ``` > A comma may be missing after the conjunctive/linking adverb "Therefore". > Agreed, fixed via this commit: https://github.com/ietf-wg-masque/draft-ietf-masque-connect-udp/commit/d7fa471c67a112153b434d35736216246f54d485 #### Section 3.6, paragraph 2 > ``` > located within a given HTTP namespace but MAY be allocated in any order. > The > ^^^^ > ``` > Use a comma before "but" if it connects two independent clauses (unless > they > are closely connected and short). > These two clauses are closely connected and short. #### Section 9.1, paragraph 12 > ``` > ke to thank Eric Rescorla for suggesting to use an HTTP method to proxy > UDP. > ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ > ``` > The verb "suggesting" is used with the gerund form. > Agreed, fixed via this commit: https://github.com/ietf-wg-masque/draft-ietf-masque-connect-udp/commit/d7fa471c67a112153b434d35736216246f54d485
- [Masque] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf… Lars Eggert via Datatracker
- Re: [Masque] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-… David Schinazi