Re: [Mavs] comments on the requirements document

dimitri papadimitriou <dpapadimitriou@psg.com> Sun, 16 October 2005 07:44 UTC

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hi

would be glad to help you here in clarifying and consolidating this document

please let me know how this work is going to progress since the next 
ietf meeting - are you going to submit a version b/f the cut-off date

ps: do you have any input about the MAVS BoF session ? i didn't see any 
BoF announcement for this meeting ?

thanks,
- dimitri.

Martin Halstead wrote:

> Dimitri
> 
> Thanks for the excellent comments! I am going to work on the next
> version of this over the week, would like to clarify some of your
> points in the word document as I am doing that.
> 
> Regards
> 
> Martin
> 
> -----Original Message----- From: mavs-bounces@ietf.org
> [mailto:mavs-bounces@ietf.org]On Behalf Of dimitri papadimitriou 
> Sent: 09 October 2005 17:35 To: mavs@ietf.org Subject: [Mavs]
> comments on the requirements document
> 
> 
> jim, all,
> 
> you will in the attached document comments, suggestions and input to
> the requirement document
> 
> in general, i think that the terms being introduced should be further
>  refiend, and the text would be more concrete if a "high level"
> reference model would be introduced
> 
> also in order to ease reading it may be advisable to be more
> synthetic in terms of requirements by adding for instance at the end
> of each section a short paragraph recollecting the requirements, the
> text as part of each section should at the end just detail the
> rational and/or motivation for introducing this requirement in the
> context of the proposed reference model; the latter should help the
> reader to put these requirements in perspective
> 
> thanks, - dimitri.
> 
> .
> 

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